Category: Writers Block
It scares me when I write stuff like this lol. I got bored, wrote this, and decided to post it for your reading pleasure, or pain.
Falling acid angel tears
Singeing flesh and scorching skin
Blood flows freely from vein to Earth
But the smile never once wavers.
A long dead corpse sealed air tight
Suddenly rises to the light
Immaculate decomposition sets in fast
And the skin begins to peal away.Can’t you smell it burning?
Pristine bone, white as snow, glistens in the Sun.
Eyes dark and hollow, follow you but you can never run fast enough.
That wicked smile frozen in time sends fear coursing through every nerve.
So you stare transfixed at the face before you, death in its most hideous form.
Reach out your hand and be polite
Make eye contact and genuinely smile
Into the fragile arms you fall, never to waken again.
WELL WHAT CAN I say. It's well written, and very evocative. Thanks for posting it.
I like the descriptions, but not my type of reading
don't worry, it's not usually my type of writing either. I was just bored and had heard the term Immaculate Decomposition in a book and so with that bordom, I wrote yet another crappy poem lol. thanks for reading anyways.
Gives me to think of those who desire cryonics...being frozen at death so as if/when a cure comes they could like be revived...only me thinks your poem would be more accurate the description. Good writing.
Damn, Connie, I'm shocked!
It's Delicious